WLAT: writ a argument.
This is my El Rancho writing in class we are doing an argument and I disagree with the statement. I also have 4 photos down blow.
Great writing Hayley but you could of had more.
I agree with Marion I give my self a green and yellow targets.
Is El Rancho a safe and friendly place? Just imagine all the dangerous activities. Most people say it's safe because it's fun, but this isn't true. Practically all the activities need an adult. Without a doubt, El Rancho is not a safe place.
Firstly, you have an adult for every activity but all they really do is watch you. If you fall off a horse, they don't care but if they did they would say “ are you okay?” “ do I look okay to you”. People say it's safe. No-one but a complete idiot will believe that.
Secondly, would you want your kid with a rifle? I know I wouldn't, and would you really give a kid a rifle or a bow? The kid might do something silly and shoot someone or shoot themselves. What if a stranger broke in and stole a rifle? Are you picking up what I'm putting down?
Finally, the water slide is rubber so you might get a rash if you are allergic to it, get a bad burn or get a bad scratch from the nails or the cracks. Clearly, even the water slide is dangerous.
Would you really let your family to go there? These are the reasons why I wouldn't go back to El Rancho. Therefore El Rancho is a dangerous place for you and your family because of the rifles, the water slide and there are many more dangerous activities at El Rancho.